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In reply to: https://t.me/upsc_mains_answer_writing_group/60758 apka answer kafi soch kr likha gya lagta h. kaafi accha answer bhi h. parantu isme kuch baatein dhyan rkhne ki hain jaise: 1. apne likha h ki sayad udarwadi netao ko british raj ka nature nahi pta tha. aisa likha sahi nahi lgta kyunki main reason unke liye ye tha ki wo sochte the ki bharat ki janta us samay kuch b krne k liye tyar nahi thi or angrez log nyay krenge. thoda sa moderate likhne ki jarurat h bas. 2. paragraph thode clearly alag alag kre jisse ki ek paragraph m ek hi… Read more »
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You answer is pretty good. however you have much improve. start with following:
1. make a proper structure of answer. Your answer must have a flow. Don’t put anything anywhere.
2. Make use of some good points from the first white revolution success. such as more trust on agriculture due to distress migration.
3. Main success of first white revolution was because of cooperative nature. use that also.
4. Donot go into the procedural details like packets and all.
overall it is nice attempt but lot to improve. thanks
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